Workbook 60/80 - Modernization of Education

Hey Students!
Education is the most important essential of life after air, water and food. India has taken giant strides after independence making it asscessible and affordable to all. As per census 2011, literacy in India stands at 74%. More is need to be done as world is changing and so is the requirement of skills. Thus, there is a need to revamp our education system and make it relevant to the current and future scenario.
Please go through the workbook and answer the required question accordingly:
Mains Work Book No.60 - modernization of education.pdf (1.3 MB)

Intro is not up to the point. You could have provided some literacy stat in it and its comparison with world. Body content is generic. Read and revise more on the topic. Before explaining challenges, you should have given its needs and successes. Way forward needs some credible solutions. You can cite specifics from NEP 2020. Keep practicing

Intro is not up to the point. You could have provided some literacy stat in it and its comparison with world. You didn’t understood the question well, its not about digitization but about modernization. Modernization includes digitization, sector specific learnings, learning about future techs etc. Body content is generic. Read and revise more on the topic.Way forward needs some credible solutions. You can cite specifics from NEP 2020. Keep practicing

Good intro, add some data in it to make it impressive. Good structure. You missed the dimension how digitalization will democratize education. Use flow charts in answers. Add credible solutions from some reports or committees like NITI aayog etc. In way forward.
2/10

Start with literacy data, rest can follow it. Good examples. Suitable flow chart. Keep practicing.

modernization of education.pdf (2.9 MB) sir please correct my answer.

Introduction is good but bit stretched. It should be in the range of 30-40 words for 10 markers and 40-50 for 15 markers. Good example. Apt flow chart. Keep practicing.