Workbook 34/50 - Police reforms

Hey students!
Law and order is the basic premise on which civilizations flourish. Police in modern societies are responsible for maintenance of this institution. Thus they need to be compassionate and friendly towards the citizens as basically they are servant of society. But on contrary in India they are transforming into masters. Police killings rarely result in punishments. Please go through the workbook and answer the question accordingly:
Work Book No.34 - Police Reforms_Final.pdf (1.1 MB)

Intro can be better. Please have your sentences grammatically correct as much as possible. First you need to provide instances of police brutality from current situation and later its causes in few points. Later the rest of points can follow. Cite credible suggestions in way forward. Keep practicing.

Good intro. Good structure, use some line diagrams as well. Cite some credible suggestions in the way forward. Keep practicing.

Intro can be better. First you need to provide instances of police brutality from current situation and later its causes in few points. Later the rest of points can follow. Use of comparison table is bit inappropriate here. Cite credible suggestions like supreme court recommendations in way forward. Keep practicing.

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Intro can become better by throwing in some stat about police brutality. All dimensions of the question has been identified. Keep practicing.

Intro can be better by throwing in some stat about police brutality. What you have written as intro is apt for writing in conclusion. First identify the needs, then solutiins then challenges and later end with way forward. Good conclusion. Keep practicing.

Sir please correct this

Yesterday in zoom class above intro, dimensions and conclusion were mentioned.

The points mentioned are fair. these are the points to rectify the problem. You need modify the approach and articulate the points as per question and question needs a subheading for identifying the problem and later other things points can follow.

Intro can be better by providing some stat about police brutality in recent years. All the dimensions of question has been identified well. You could have quoted ARC report in conclusion rather than intro. Keep practicing.