Workbook 33/50 - Indian Monsoon

Hey students!

In India 68% of total net sown land is under rainfed agriculture. Thus monsoon automatically becomes an important phenomenon which we need to decode. So far many factors like heat distribution, air mass regulation etc. have been thought of, but still we always end up guessing its occurrence and intensity. This is not good as erratic monsoon can seriously affect the food security of nation. Please go through the workbook and answer the required question accordingly:
Work Book No.33 - Indian monsoon_Final.pdf (1.6 MB)

Good intro. Nice structuring and format. Apt conclusion. You can also add various missions taken up to understand monsoon like one by India and U.S. Keep practicing.

Intro can be better. You can start with what monsoon is. Later under line various dimensions like agriculture, industry, climate etc. In significance. You can also add various missions undertaken to understand monsoon. Keep practicing.

Intro can be better. Be bit more articulate and particular with your words and sentences. Significance needs more precise points. Keep practicing.

Intro needs to be better. You need work hard on structure and presentation. Read and revise more to build content. Keep your words and sentences more articulate. Try is commendable. Keep practicing.

indian monsoon.pdf (5.0 MB) sir please correct my answer.

Apt intro. All dimensions of question have been identified well. Good structure and conclusion. Keep practicing.