Workbook 30/50 - Tuberculosis Treatment during Pandemic times

Hey students!

In 2019, an estimated 10 million people fell ill with tuberculosis (TB) worldwide. 5.6 million men, 3.2 million women and 1.2 million children. TB is present in all countries and age groups. But TB is curable and preventable. Government of India seeks to eliminate T.B. by 2025. Though the target is optimistic but India was well on track till the pandemic outbreak.
Please go through the workbook and answer the required question accordingly:
Work Book No.30 - Tuberculosis and India.pdf (1.2 MB)

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Intro can be better, cite some who or nsso data. You need to focus on how did covid affected their treatment regime like by citing lovkdowns, covid specialised hospitals etc. You need to work on structure and way forward needs to be better. Keep practicing.
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Good intro, good conclusion. Try to use some line diagrams etc. And stick to word limit. Overall a good attempt. Keep practicing.
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Intro can be better, cite some WHO data. Good structure but can be made better by use of line diagrams. Overall a good attempt. Keep practicing.
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Apt intro but can get better. Points format are way to go as they save time and space. Conclusion needs to be better. Keep practicing.

Apt intro but can get better. Good choice of format but you need to focus more on how covid impacted TB treatment. Conclusion is satisfactory. Keep practicing.

Intro can be better, cite some who data. Good format choice but can get better by use of line diagrams. Good conclusion. Overall a good attempt. Keep practicing.
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TB treatment.pdf (4.0 MB) sir please correct my answer.

Good intro, but it needs to be short, crisp and impactful. All dimensions of question has been identified well. Good conclusion. Keep practicing.