Workbook 26/50 - Afghan Peace Process

Hey Students!
Stable peace and development go hand in hand. The prominent example is Afghanistan. Though it is desirable to pursue peace, but it should not be at any cost. Withdrawal of U.S. forces is desirable from Afghanistan so that localites solve their issues promptly but the hastiness shown by U.S. administration in withdrawal is uncanny. Please go through the workbook and answer the required question accordingly:
Work Book No.26 - Afghan Peace Process.pdf (1.2 MB)

Good intro but it can get more better by starting what orompted the deal. Good conclusion. Nice choice of format. Be more astute with conclusion. Keep practicing.

Nice intro. Try to stick to word limit. Use line diagrams to make your answer attractive. Good conclusion. Overall a good attempt. Keep practicing.
4/10

Intro can be better. All dimensions of question have been addressed. Try to use line diagrams to make your answer attractive. Keep practicing.
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In intro you could have mentioned the reason for why there is need of peace talks. Choice of format is good. Conclusion is generic. Read and revise more to build content. You can add graphs like incidence of violence in Afghanistan etc. Keep practicing.

In intro you could have mentioned the reason for why there is need of peace talks. Question has potential for the use of line diagrams and flow charts. Conclusion is generic. Be more articulate about your words and sentences. Read and revise more to build content. You can add graphs like incidence of violence in Afghanistan etc. Keep practicing.