Topic 42/50 - Modernization of Agriculture

Hey Students!
Agriculture is a way of life in India. 70% of its rural households still depend primarily on agriculture for their livelihood, with 82% of farmers being small and marginal. The share of agriculture in GDP increased to 19.9 per cent in 2020-21 from 17.8 per cent in 2019-20, primarily owing to the current pandemic. Since there is huge dependence, its modernization in every respect is essential.
Please go through the workbook and answer the required question accordingly:
Mains Work Book No.42 - Modernization of Agriculture.pdf (579.4 KB)

Good intro. You need to structure your answers as current state of agriculture, need for modernization, challenges associated, govt. Initiative and than way forward. Moreover you could have added map to showcase state of farmers in different states. Keep practicing.

Good intro. You need to structure your answers as current state of agriculture, need for modernization, challenges associated, govt. Initiative and than way forward. Moreover you could have added map to showcase state of farmers in different states. Keep practicing.

Introduction can be better. Try to add some fact like agriculture’s share or its potential in GDP. Good example and suitable flowchart. Flow chart can become better by adding specific informations like citing agricultural intensity data etc. and multidimensionality like how it can transform farmer’s life. Keep practicing

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Intro is good but try to keep it short and crisp. Better would have been to merge the two data into a short paragraph. Suitable example, but flow chart could have been better by adding specific informations like citing agricultural intensity data etc. and multidimensionality like how it can transform farmer’s life. Keep practicing

Satisfactory intro. Definition of agriculture modernization could have been better. Good example. Flow chart is bit vague. Read more to build content. Keep practicing.

Good introduction. Try to be innovative with sub-headings. Use line diagrams and tables. Try to stick to word limits. Keep practicing.

Good intro. Apt presentation. You missed the dimension why there is dire need of modernization. Add some facts in advantages and issues. Overall a good attempt. Keep practicing.
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modernization of indian agriculture.pdf (4.7 MB) sir please correct my answer.

Good intro. but try to keep it short and precise (30 to40 words). Good example. Flow chart could have been better. Instead of identifying issue in flow chart, use it to represent how modernization can tackle a problem. Keep practicing.