Topic 41/50 - E-commerce in India

Hey Students!

The competition in the e-commerce business in India is fierce. The market is filled with many local and foreign companies trying to hold the maximum market share. In 2018, the e-commerce sales across India were estimated to increase by 25%. The growth rate, however, was predicted to observe a slight dip in 2022. Consequently, the revenue-generating potential has also increased.

Please go through the workbook and answer the required question accordingly:
Mains Work Book No.41 - E-commerce in India.pdf (607.8 KB)

Definition of e - commerce is in correct. You should follow question’s lead while writing the answer like it asked e-commerce is a life saver, you have to write why and later other things shall follow. You need to be bit more innovative with the sub-headings. Way forward and introductions are preferred in short paragraph format. Keep practicing.

Good intro. You missed to address how e-commerce served as life saver during panemic. Other dimensions have been identified well. You could touched various dimensions like how e-commerce is advantageous to farmers, small businessman, woman etc in 10- 15 words. Mention of CCI in way forward would have further enhanced the answer. Overall a good attempt. Keep practicing.
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Satisfactory intro. It is generally advisable to avoid quotes in essays. Flow chart could have been better. Keep practicing.

Apt intro. Satisfactory example. Flow chart could have been better. Keep practicing.

Good intro. Better to site the source of info in example to make it credible. All dimensions of question have not been identified. You missed how e-commerce served as life saver. You need structure your answer well to make it impactful. Try to stick to word limit. Satisfactory conclusion. Keep practicing.

Apt intro. Satisfactory example. All dimesions of question have not been identified well. You have focused way to much on e commerce functioning. Try to stick to word limit and work on the structure. Keep practicing.

Apt intro. All dimensions of question have not been identified. A important key word was life saver in pandemic. Try to stick to word limit and structure your answer well. Keep practicing.

Satisfactory intro. Good example and suitable flow chart. Keep practicing.

Good intro. Avoid vague claims without citing any credible report or study. Other examples are good. Suitable flow chart. Keep practicing.