Topic 15/50 - India and the climate change

Hey Students!!

We have come across many time regarding the news related to the climate change. It is the most potential threat in the future to come for humanity. There have been several steps initiated by countries to tackle this issue. Kindly go through the workbook and answer the questions accordingly.

Mains Work Book No.15 - India and Climate Change.pdf (1.0 MB)

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@arunkumar_cr7 - Nicely attempted answer. Intro is framed around right keywords. Keep practising. Keep it up.

@P_vijaylaxmi_Goud - you have defined the keyword nicely. But please try to keep your answer in a simple manner by defining climate change as it is the main keyword. Keep practising.

@sharvani - You have attempted well but please try to define climate change in the intro and then continue forward. Keep practising.

@Jayaraj.N - intro is simple and precise. In the opinion you do not need to stretch much just present a opinion which you have gathered from the article.

@prem_kumar - intro is fine and related to the relevant keyword. Kindly post clear images. Keep practising.

@Vaadala_Ganesh - intro is precise and simple with good fact. Opinion is also fine. Keep it up. Keep practising.

@Jvkalyan1234 - you have attempted nicely. In intro try to include some stats or reports to substantiate climate change effect. Keep practising.

@Ishaq - please try to include some facts or report data in the intro to substantiate climate change phenomena. Keep practising.

@deveshsoni999 - you have defined crisis multiplier nicely but here you can chose to define climate change as it is the center of question and will help you keep your answer in a simple way. Keep practising.

@durgaprasad_ankapall - Please define climate change first and then you can tell how it is a crisis multiplier. Other aspects are fine. Keep practising.

@mercy_alladi - Presentation is very nice. Please try to include some report data in the intro to substantiate climate change. Keep practising.

@Malavika - Please define climate change in the intro and give some data regarding that. Afterwards you can explain how it is a crisis multiplier. Other aspects are fine. Keep practising.

hey there!
Try to begin the intro with a definition of climate change, points format is better for the respective question. You need bit of more reading. Keep practicing.

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Nice attempt. Definition in the intro can be better and wordings can be more articulate. Keep practicing!

Intro can be better. Try to add some facts and figures in it. you missed the dimension how climate change is a crisis multiplier. choice of format is good. In conclusion try to add some credible suggestions from various reports and studies. Keep practicing.